The Top 10 Mistakes New Writers Make

October 03, 2019 4 min read


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Guest post by author Phoebe Yu

So you want to write but don’t know where to start? The journey to becoming a published author is a bumpy ride with lots of ups and downs along the way. 

As a new writer learning the ropes you will inevitably make some mistakes. That’s okay, but here’s a list of common mistakes (in no particular order) that will help you avoid them.

1. A Weak Introduction

First impressions are everything. Often, writers will start with a long description of the setting, or a mundane event like waking up from a dream or talking to themselves in a mirror. 

Not only are these clichés, but we don’t learn anything about the story or the character.  

Readers will keep reading when you make them care about a character and their motivations.  Who are they and what do they want?

That’s why the first paragraph – no, the first sentence – is important to hook your readers right away.  For more tips on writing introductions, seehere.

2. Too Much Backstory

Some backstory is good to introduce your character.  But save some for the rest of the book.

Whether you’re writing a thriller, romance, YA, or any other genre, some detective work on the part of the reader is what keeps them curious. 

Besides, too much backstory in the beginning derails the story when it should be moving along.

Give your readers time to get to know your characters and fall in love with them.

3. Lack of Research on Genre

Different genres have their own set of conventions about word count, character ages, etc.Some new writers end up with a manuscript that’s too long, too short or a premise that doesn’t clearly fit into a category. 

Genres exist to make it easier for publishers to market a book and for bookstores to know where to shelve a book.

Even if you’re doing a cross-genre, clearly decide under which category your manuscript falls under.  It will likely fall under one genre more than the other.

If you want to reinvent the wheel and do away with genres, realize the risks you’re taking.  Alternatively, you can always self-publish if you don’t wish to go the traditional route.

4. A Weak Plot

Plotting is one of the most challenging aspects of crafting a story.  No plot = no story. Sometimes writers make the mistake of thinking a series of events equals plot. 

A plot has a beginning, middle and end.  Think back to your high school or creative writing classes regarding the elements of a plot: exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and resolution. 

For more tips on how to outline a plot, seehere.

5. Telling, Not Showing

The art of writing is also about how well you can pull readers into your world. 

Instead of simply explaining to your readers what’s happening, let them experience it as if they were actually there. 

Engage their five senses: see, hear, touch, smell, and taste.

6. Writing Like it's 1889

All writers look to other writers for inspiration.  And what could be better than the classics? They’re a classic for a reason, right? 

This is why some writers end up writing overly flowery language or just end up sounding like they’re from a different era.

There’s nothing wrong with reading the classics. But realize that audiences now are different and the way we communicate has drastically changed since the Victorian era. 

Unless you’re writing historical fiction, write for a contemporary audience.

7. Lack of Editing

New writers may think writing will take up 75% of their time, and editing only 25%. 

Reality is the opposite. The first draft is rarely the final draft. The real work happens when you start editing and revising your work.

Editing is not just checking for spelling or grammatical mistakes.  You have to watch for plot holes, inconsistencies, flow, etc.

The final draft might not resemble your first draft at all!  Having another set of eyes, like a friend or a writing group, read over your work and give you feedback is often useful.

8. Query Too Soon

It’s understandable to get excited once the first draft is done. New writers tend to skip the editing and dive straight into querying

The problem is, once you query an agent or publisher and get rejected, you’ve lost your chance. 

Don’t rush. Remember to get your work into the best shape possible before querying!  

RELATED: The Ultimate Guide to Getting a Literary Agent

9. Lack of Research on Agents and Publishers

Sure, it can be tempting to shoot for as many agents or publishers as possible, hoping one of them will bite. 

But using a targeted approach will give you more chances of success.

Look for agents or publishers that publish in your genre.  Agents often post the types of manuscripts they’re currently looking for onManuscript Wish List.

10. Not Reading Enough Books in Your Genre

As you’re doing research on the genre you’re writing for, it’s helpful to read as many books as you can in your specific genre. 

This way, you’ll get a better feel of the style of writing in your particular genre and the audience that might read it.  

Now that you know not to make the common mistakes new writers make, you can start polishing that manuscript. Enjoy the bumpy ride!


3 Responses


November 07, 2022

A mistake I’m seeing ocasinaly on the online writing websites is colored text, and lots of it. Yay. It’s really fun to read in red, bule orange, green and such. Also they don’t think about colorblind people when doing this. So add this mistake to your list. Just imagine a rainbow text being sent to a publishers editor. /facepalm


February 23, 2022

Excellent article. Valuable insight for new writers as well as seasoned pros. A clear focus on the mistakes to avoid in order to improve writing is always worthy of attention.

Thank you, kindly, for your helpful information.


February 03, 2022

Thank you. enjoyed your page!

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